We met in the demo room, first, to receive feedback on our introduction paragraphs. I also distributed a HANDOUT that gives TWELVE editing marks I use to tell you what you need to do to make your paper better. You can obtain this from me in 405.
I also reviewed the structure for body paragraphs; you must mark these using the editing function in Microsoft Word, just as you did for your introduction.
We then proceeded to the lab where you:
- fixed the errors in your introduction
- asked me QUESTIONS!!! :)
- and noted that feedback is GOOD!!! :)
- wrote a minimum of two body paragraphs for DRAFT #2 (10 points: topic sentence, supporting details, and a transition sentence--all labeled)
- SAVED, PRINTED, and SUBMITTED
Read "Joy Through the Tears" on page 148; complete the Discussion Questions (1-5) at the end of the essay
There is a quiz on five-paragraph essay structure AND the Writing Process in class, too.